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Post by shadytrashvoid on Tue Apr 07, 2015 1:37 am

Sort of freeform thing I wrote back when I was less confused about him being a fire god.

In the lazy heat, surrounded by
The deafening peace of summer
I see you dancing
in the middle of the road
and on grey tin roofs
of houses.

I hear you laughing
in the rhythmic clicks
of the barracuda
the playful melody of magpies
and other quotidian things.

I catch your scent
in scorching brickwork
and thirsty eucalyptus.

You slip past my lips
in Bacardi and coke
brimming with ice, of course,
but not for long.

And when I retreat inside
to escape your blazing sun
and blistering ground
I'll peel the skin
from your burning kisses
and smile.

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Post by Darkamber on Tue Apr 07, 2015 3:03 am

Great poem!

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Post by njm on Tue Apr 07, 2015 6:59 am

Lovely poem!

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Post by journeyintoinsanity on Tue Apr 07, 2015 8:40 am

Ohmy gosh, that's fabulous! Smile
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Post by Lokakisa on Tue Apr 07, 2015 11:41 am

Oooh that's very nice.

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Post by shadytrashvoid on Tue Apr 07, 2015 7:38 pm

Thank you guys ^_^

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Post by Just.Christine on Wed Apr 08, 2015 4:55 am

Holy crap, you're gifted with words!
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Post by Moon Rouge on Wed Apr 08, 2015 2:58 pm

Great poem! <
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