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Post by kestrelsings on Tue Feb 03, 2015 3:27 am

Tease me and teach me,
Love me and laugh
The kiss of the candle
The call of your craft
Fill me,
Inspire me,
Lead on into flame-
Leave me boneless
And breathless
And calling your name

This was going to be a song, but for some reason it stuck at just these few lines, and I think I like it better this way. I have no doubt I'll write him a song (or ten) before long, but I think I needed something that would stick in my head. I use it like a meditation tool in busy stressful situations sometimes, reciting it in my head calms me down and fills me with joy and warmth.

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Post by Just.Christine on Tue Feb 03, 2015 4:46 pm

Wow, lots of talent here! Glad all you talented people are finding this forum! Smile
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Post by Darkamber on Thu Feb 05, 2015 5:08 am

This is lovely!

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Post by njm on Thu Feb 05, 2015 5:36 pm

Beautiful piece. I look forward to hearing your songs when you come to write them!

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Post by Elvena on Tue Feb 02, 2016 4:35 pm

Beautiful!
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Post by Just.Christine on Tue Feb 02, 2016 7:41 pm

kestrelsings wrote:Tease me and teach me,
Love me and laugh
The kiss of the candle
The call of your craft
Fill me,
Inspire me,
Lead on into flame-
Leave me boneless
And breathless
And calling your name

This was going to be a song, but for some reason it stuck at just these few lines, and I think I like it better this way. I have no doubt I'll write him a song (or ten) before long, but I think I needed something that would stick in my head. I use it like a meditation tool in busy stressful situations sometimes, reciting it in my head calms me down and fills me with joy and warmth.

Excellent! Good rhyme and meter! Always enjoy a good poem or lyric. Yours is great!
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Post by Dragonwings on Tue Feb 02, 2016 7:54 pm

Very nice. I love the rhyming.
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